10/16/2026
Running with an ad from what you said you would do 8 years ago in your campaign is a little wild to me, but I digress…
I’m not a teacher.
You are.
This paper needs some revision.
YOUR ASSIGNMENT:
Explain why you deserve another term.
“Standing up to socialism.”
đź”´ Define your terms. Which specific policy are you referencing?
“Taking on the radical Socialist left.”
đź”´ Name-calling does not support your thesis.
“Stopping … illegal immigrant handouts.”
đź”´ Loaded language. Identify the program, eligibility requirements, and actual benefit.
“Casting the deciding vote.”
đź”´ Show your work. Include the bill number, date, and vote count.
“Improving Tennessee’s schools.”
đź”´ Supporting evidence needed. What improved? Include funding, staffing, or student outcomes.
“Fighting against the woke socialist agenda.”
🔴 You’ve repeated your accusation without explaining it. Be specific.
“Protecting our communities.”
đź”´ Explain how. Identify the legislation and demonstrate its results.
“The radical Left’s dangerous, soft-on-crime agenda.”
đź”´ Whose proposal? What would it do? What evidence supports your conclusion?
FINAL GRADE: INCOMPLETE
Your paper identifies several things you oppose but gives voters little detail about what you will deliver.
I can give your constituents what you HAVE delivered, but I’ll give you the opportunity to correct yourself first.
Please revise with specific policies, credible sources, measurable results, and a plan for the people you’re asking to represent.
“Fighting” appears repeatedly. Explain what your constituents have won.
